Bob’s Hot Dog. By Escher 7G

Posted by: dggsreader | November 29, 2007 | No Comment |

There was a young hot dog from Bob’s

Who went around looking for jobs

He went for a run and fell in a bun

And got covered in ketchup and mustard

Rhyme by Escher 7G

under: Poems

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Escher, this is a very good poem/rhyme, and I like it very much!

By: dggsreaders on November 29, 2007
at 6:03 am

What a wicked poem Escher, I wouldn’t like to fall in a bun and get covered in ketchup and mustard!

By: dggsreaders on November 29, 2007
at 6:03 am

Escher i love your poem but it doesn’t make sense heather 7G

By: dggsreaders on November 29, 2007
at 6:14 am

Hi Escher love your poem create imagination wish i could write like you!!!!!

Chloexxxxx 7G

By: dggsreaders on November 29, 2007
at 6:21 am

Hey Escher, great poem with alot of imagination

Emmaxxx 7G

By: dggsreaders on November 29, 2007
at 6:22 am

Hi Ecsher love your poem great imagination. You should do more poems!!

Chloexxxxx 7G

P.S I had to write it again because i made a mistake! OOPPS

By: dggsreaders on November 29, 2007
at 6:24 am

Escher.. it’s great! Where can I get imagination like yours!

Sophie 7g

By: dggsreaders on November 30, 2007
at 6:30 am

This is a great peom!! Amy 7S

By: dggsreaders on December 19, 2007
at 5:30 am

yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

By: dggsreaders on December 19, 2007
at 6:07 am

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