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Charlotte 7M – Short Story – Situation 1 in Draenites life (part 1 of story)

Posted by: yearsevenlibrarians | March 25, 2008 | No Comment |



It was a cold dark night as Draenite Lazuli walked down the road. She would have taken a jacket if she had not been such a rebel. Her tights were ripped. Her top flimsy and almost see-through. She was not your average fourteen year old. For one she had naturally purple hair – i know what you are thinking, Fairy Tale, Ridiculous and other things but all will become clear later on – she also had yellow iris’ and her pupils were more grey than black, but more strangely, nobody knows how old she is. There are guesses. Yes, i said fourteen. That has been the guess for the last three years… Exactly, i doubt she is the same age in that amount of space!

Tonight she happened to be on her way to her ‘home’ in Dorset. She thought this place was REVOLTING and longed to live somewhere else. So she planned for an escape one day. However tonight was different. Before now she had never seen anyone with hair out of the ordinary colours – blonde, brown, red, black etc… – but crowded round a small building were people with blue, green and pink hair. She looked at them. They were sorta scary. They had noserings and black eye make-up and god knows what else attached to them. Draenite glanced around wearily and trudged up towards them. A girl with no hair other than a green pony tail and small spike on her head said “Oi, we’ve got a new comer. Wicked clothes she’s got too” She introduced herself as Alaina. “um…. Hi, I’m Draenite.” She stuttered to the crowd now staring at her. As though in a trance they all said. “Hi Draenite” Draenite was beginning to feel nervous. Her hands sweated and her body seemed to freeze. What was she doing? Why was she standing here after a perfectly Awful night, when all she wanted to do was go to bed?
“Oi, Draenite. Ive got a little drink here. Wanna try?” A Boy with a long blue hair shouted to her.
“Umm…. No thanks.”
“Awww… go on, dont be a baby!”
They all stared at her. What could she do?…

 To Be Continued…

Now think about what you would do in this situation. Comment plz!!
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